By Rome A petrol engine on a tractor, it works because step 1 the chain will go around and that will make the nose of the chain step 2 warms the petrol.And the oil will start making the engine run My goal is: Improve the accuracy and range of punctuation.
I like how you added so much detail!
ReplyDeleteThats so cool i love reading about petrol engine tractor I love reading about it I think it was very cool I just think you need to go back and add full stops in capital letters
ReplyDeleteHi Rome. I think that tractors are very cool and you explained how they work. And you added a nice picture to go with it. But you might need to extend your writing and a a bit more detail. Anais
ReplyDeleteHi Rome I think tractors are cool and fun to ride. But I think you need to add a little bit more detail and some more sentences.At the start of your writing you put By Rome after you have finished your writing you should Paragraph and the put your name OK (:
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